I liked the editing (by the editor/lead actor Dan Natchsheim) and on screen texts and digits. The story was weak if you haven't seen the feature though.

Pretty weird, but at least not boring. It's fun to see little details that made it to the feature length version.

It's pretty good at conveying a mood of confusion within a hyper-structured society but it gets so caught up in visual and aural experimentation that the narrative is left rather weak, losing the emotional payoff it's supposed to have. Kind of foreshadows future Lucas, I guess.

Not bad at all for a student film.

A complete mess of electronic voices and snappy editing. No real story, and it feels really amateurish.